The new course of Academic Writing arouses a number of
expectations. My first expectation towards this course is to achieve knowledge
about Academic writing, its structure and peculiarities. I also expect to be
able to analyze pieces of writing and prove that it is really a piece of
certain type of writing. By the end of the course I want be able to select good
the information for a paragraph or article, plan what to write and see my own
defects in writing. I am sure that the course will help me to get ready for
writing my Licenta Paper. With the help of the new course I will improve myself
and the pieces of writing produced by me will be more coherent and clear for the
reader.
Dear Kate,
ОтветитьУдалитьI think this paragraph is better from previous one. You were less ironic this time. You described your expectations step by step. I want to point out the combination "to select good the information". Did you mean to select good information or to select the information in a good way? Maybe to select well the information. I liked that you mentioned about Licenta Paper. You will do it! Have a nice week my dear!
Love,
Alina
Dear Kate, basically no irony this time. :)
ОтветитьУдалить- 'to achieve knowledge' do these words collocate?
- how could you say otherwise 'it is really a piece of certain type of writing'?
- 'see my own defects' should be reformulated
But as Alina said the improvements are seen. She is right about 'good'