Benefits and Challenges of Internship in Moldova.
One of the stages of Moldovan System of Education is compulsory internship. The internship usually lasts
from four to six weeks. It takes place at the beginning of the second term of
the third year of studies and at the beginning of the first term of the fourth
year of studies. The future teachers go to gain their teaching experience at
primary schools and gymnasiums. The internship brings its benefits and at the
same time, its challenges.
The
most important thing that an intern gains during the internship is valuable
experience that can't
be got at the University. During the
internship a student is able to use the
acquired knowledge in practice. There’s no
theory without practice and one of the best ways to apply knowledge is to go to
school and teach pupils.
Another benefit
of the internship is that the student finally takes
the decision: to be or not to be a teacher. During the internship
the student behaves the way he/she will behave in everyday life if he/she decides
to become a teacher: he/she goes to school every day, prepares lesson
plans and teaching
materials. Thus, the student can understand
wether he/she is ready to become a teacher or not.
Among
the benefits of internship in Moldova one can notice the ability to learn from
the colleagues. The student attends the
teacher’s lessons and learns his/her way of teaching, which may be useful, as
such a teacher is usually an experienced one. The intern also attends his /her
colleague’s classes and this practice also helps to discover new things, new
methods and strategies.
There's
also another side of internship at Moldovan schools. One of the challanges of going to school and practicing teaching skills is the absence of the wish to become a teacher after the internship is
finished. A student may lose the aspiration to
become a teacher because pupils can be noisy and disrespectful or even because a teacher has a lot of
work to do every day.
Among the
challenges of the internship one can notice different opinion with the teacher who is intended to guide him/her. This is the
problem that I faced during my internship. The intern is not allowed to argue
with his/her teacher. Once I didn’t agree with the teacher’s remarks concerning the grammatical topic,
the only thing I could do was to agree with the teacher whose point of view I
considered incorrect.
The internship may strengthen one's student wish to become a
teacher or, on the contrary, change his/her point of view concerning the future occupation. In any case, due to
internship a student becomes more experienced and more confident.
1st paragraph:
ОтветитьУдалить- Your TS is rather good.
- I don’t think the third sentence is necessary. It should be reformulated in other one.
-The last sentence is not connected with the previous ones.
2nd paragraph:
- does the word “intern” fit the context??
- “is able to use” sounds strange…there should be used another appropriate verb.
- “no theory without practice” is this a quote? Are you allowed to use it?
3rd paragraph:
- the last sentence states the same meaning the first one does.
4th paragraph:
- Is this “an ability” to learn?
- the second sentence should be reformulated.
- “to discover” ?maybe another verb is to be used in this context
the 5th paragraph:
- another “side”...what is meant here?
- “absence of the wish” is too metaphorical
- is it really “an aspiration”? you seem to be ironic as you used to be))
the 6th paragraph:
- the whole paragraph is wrong. Academic Writing is OBJECTIVE, not subjective. There’s no “my point of view” or something like this. Be careful.
the 7th paragraph:
- “one’s student wish” ????
As far as I noticed, you are still ironic in a way. Think again!
Yet, there is connection among the paragraphs but there’s always a room for improvement.
Good luck!
Hei))))))) Thanks ! I will improve myself. BTW I didn't have an intention to be ironic(
ОтветитьУдалить1st paragraph:
ОтветитьУдалить- the first sentence to be deleted!!! Maybe you should begin by telling what an internship is. Have a look at the way your fellows started their essays!!!
- I would say: ‘It happens twice: at the beginning…’
- the fourth sentence – WO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2nd paragraph:
- NO CONTRACTIONS!!!!
- ‘thing’!!!!!!!!!!!!
- Kate, you might get surprised but there IS theory without practice!!!! Such an introduction is not needed!
3rd paragraph:
- ‘makes the decision whether to become a teacher or choose another career’!!!!!!!!!
- the second sentence is too long!
- ‘or not’!!!!!!!!!
4th paragraph:
- it’s not an ‘ability’ but probably ‘opportunity’!!! I would begin: ‘The opportunity to learn from the colleagues is another benefit obtained during the internship’!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
- ‘as much as a teacher…’ – to be deleted!!!
- no need to repeat ‘new’!!!
5thparagraph:
- the first sentence doesn’t make sense
- ‘of going…’ till ‘is’ – redundant!!!
- it’s not ‘the absence of the wish to become a teacher’!!!!!!!!!!!!
- not ‘lose the aspiration’
6th paragraph:
- the first sentence doesn’t make sense
- avoid using ‘I’!!!!!!!
- the fourth sentence to be rewritten!!!!!!!
7th paragraph:
- ‘occupation’??????
- you can’t live without using metaphors, can’t you?
- is ‘In any case’ appropriate?