четверг, 9 октября 2014 г.

Benefits and Challenges of Internship in Moldova. 


One of the stages of Moldovan System of Education is compulsory internship. The internship usually lasts from four to six weeks. It takes place at the beginning of the second term of the third year of studies and at the beginning of the first term of the fourth year of studies. The future teachers go to gain their teaching experience at primary schools and gymnasiums. The internship brings its benefits and at the same time, its challenges.
   
 The most important thing that an intern gains during the internship is valuable experience that can't be got at the University. During the internship a student is able to use the acquired knowledge in practice. There’s no theory without practice and one of the best ways to apply knowledge is to go to school and teach pupils.
  
 Another benefit of the internship is that the student finally takes the decision: to be or not to be a teacher. During the internship the student behaves the way he/she will behave in everyday life if he/she decides to become a teacher: he/she goes to school every day, prepares lesson plans and teaching materials. Thus, the student can understand wether he/she is ready to become a teacher or not.
  
  Among the benefits of internship in Moldova one can notice the ability to learn from the colleagues. The student attends the teacher’s lessons and learns his/her way of teaching, which may be useful, as such a teacher is usually an experienced one. The intern also attends his /her colleague’s classes and this practice also helps to discover new things, new methods and strategies.
  
  There's also another side of internship at Moldovan schools. One of the challanges of going to school and practicing teaching skills is the absence of the wish to become a teacher after the internship is finished. A student may lose the aspiration to become a teacher because pupils can be noisy and disrespectful or even because a teacher has a lot of work to do every day.
    
Among the challenges of the internship one can notice different opinion with the teacher who is intended to guide him/her. This is the problem that I faced during my internship. The intern is not allowed to argue with his/her teacher. Once I didn’t agree with the teacher’s remarks concerning the grammatical topic, the only thing I could do was to agree with the teacher whose point of view I considered incorrect.
    
  The internship may strengthen one's student wish to become a teacher or, on the contrary, change his/her point of view concerning the future occupation. In any case, due to internship a student becomes more experienced and more confident.  




3 комментария:

  1. 1st paragraph:
    - Your TS is rather good.
    - I don’t think the third sentence is necessary. It should be reformulated in other one.
    -The last sentence is not connected with the previous ones.

    2nd paragraph:
    - does the word “intern” fit the context??
    - “is able to use” sounds strange…there should be used another appropriate verb.
    - “no theory without practice” is this a quote? Are you allowed to use it?

    3rd paragraph:
    - the last sentence states the same meaning the first one does.

    4th paragraph:
    - Is this “an ability” to learn?
    - the second sentence should be reformulated.
    - “to discover” ?maybe another verb is to be used in this context

    the 5th paragraph:
    - another “side”...what is meant here?
    - “absence of the wish” is too metaphorical
    - is it really “an aspiration”? you seem to be ironic as you used to be))

    the 6th paragraph:
    - the whole paragraph is wrong. Academic Writing is OBJECTIVE, not subjective. There’s no “my point of view” or something like this. Be careful.

    the 7th paragraph:
    - “one’s student wish” ????

    As far as I noticed, you are still ironic in a way. Think again!
    Yet, there is connection among the paragraphs but there’s always a room for improvement.
    Good luck!

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  2. Hei))))))) Thanks ! I will improve myself. BTW I didn't have an intention to be ironic(

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  3. 1st paragraph:
    - the first sentence to be deleted!!! Maybe you should begin by telling what an internship is. Have a look at the way your fellows started their essays!!!
    - I would say: ‘It happens twice: at the beginning…’
    - the fourth sentence – WO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    2nd paragraph:
    - NO CONTRACTIONS!!!!
    - ‘thing’!!!!!!!!!!!!
    - Kate, you might get surprised but there IS theory without practice!!!! Such an introduction is not needed!

    3rd paragraph:
    - ‘makes the decision whether to become a teacher or choose another career’!!!!!!!!!
    - the second sentence is too long!
    - ‘or not’!!!!!!!!!

    4th paragraph:
    - it’s not an ‘ability’ but probably ‘opportunity’!!! I would begin: ‘The opportunity to learn from the colleagues is another benefit obtained during the internship’!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    - ‘as much as a teacher…’ – to be deleted!!!
    - no need to repeat ‘new’!!!

    5thparagraph:
    - the first sentence doesn’t make sense
    - ‘of going…’ till ‘is’ – redundant!!!
    - it’s not ‘the absence of the wish to become a teacher’!!!!!!!!!!!!
    - not ‘lose the aspiration’

    6th paragraph:
    - the first sentence doesn’t make sense
    - avoid using ‘I’!!!!!!!
    - the fourth sentence to be rewritten!!!!!!!

    7th paragraph:
    - ‘occupation’??????
    - you can’t live without using metaphors, can’t you?
    - is ‘In any case’ appropriate?

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